Meanie: AKA: Chuck

Baby dwaygun

Thursday, May 08, 2008

Haiku Thursday...

Me Mawmaw iz heppin me wite diz doh u dan weed it!

Huge yellow monsters rattling the china
Digging, pushing, swallowing dirt
To build more dwellings for humans

Diz is duh veuw owt me windoh an mee dont yike it!
Now kwit yo winin nawtee munkee!



At 12:18 PM, Blogger A.Bananna said...

Did you think of that haiku chuck?? I really really like it. I think you did really really good on this post! :) maybe you should ask them if you can take a ride in their tractor. I hate it when they destroy stuff here too! I love you wonderful chuck!

At 3:08 PM, Blogger Velvet Ginger (Rubye Jean) said...

I don't like the "progress" either.
Our little town is torn up right now because they are building a round-about. The road is torn up on the way into our shop ffs!
love you chuck!

At 8:59 PM, Blogger Ms. Creek said...

yes, progress is bitter sweet, isn't it? and its irony is like no other!

just how many syllables per line is in your rules of haiku, chuck? lol or does it vary?

At 1:43 AM, Blogger Dilly said...

Wat mean, nawtee munkee?
Com see- Dilly hav foto ov vew from Dilly windo too!


At 4:46 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Chuck nice try at a Haiku.
5 - 7 - 5 syllables and try to use only one or two verbs.
Yellow monsters are scary.

At 9:34 PM, Blogger Ms. Creek said...

chuck, don't forget to tell your maw maw happy mothers day!

At 8:50 AM, Blogger Velvet Ginger (Rubye Jean) said...

i hope you make your mawmaw breakfast in bed!

At 8:11 AM, Blogger Velvet Ginger (Rubye Jean) said...

time time time chuckie boy

At 8:40 AM, Blogger Lynetta said...

I love your Haiku, Meanie! Very deep and thought-provoking. Loves to you and your MawMaw!


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